Rettelling the Important part of the story

W.A.L.T.  Retell the Important part of the HOLES Novel 

This Blog post is about sharing  my learning about Rettelling the Important parts of the HOLES novel.  This Term 3, week 5, At Reading we learned how to Retell the Important part of the story,Link I've done a comic Strip about Retteling the Important part of the Holes novel,  It's make me challenge to find some Ideas how to make a comic strip and also some pictures, luckily , I found some ideas from the google. 

I learned how to make a comic strip, and down below there's a slideshow, show how my comic look, and there's a detail on the side if you not understand the words in the picture, have a look on the right, the word on the right and the left it's just the same, but I added a couple of detail.

I hope you ENJOY this BLOG POST!!

Please comment on my blog..             

Somalia Writting

W.A.L.T. Write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or the robots, or the captain 

Hi people! This Blog post is about sharing what I've learned,

This Term 3, week 4, 2017 We write a writing about Somalia, Somalia is about pirates attacked the big sheep and the captain, and the Robots save the day. I learned this following words:

Wicked - Wicked means Evil

Frightening - Frightening means making someone afraid

Terrible - Terrible means extremely bad or serious

I don't know this word before because I'm a Filipino and  I still learning my English language, This writing make me challenge to use jersey words.

I hope you guys ENJOY my writing!!

Bye Guys!!!!      

“Somalia”

Written by: Elisha Mae

It was 6:51 of the afternoon, I can see the sun was about to go down, I was at the coast of Somalia, Sailing  the ship to Somalia, Somalia was a country, it’s located in East of the African. I can see the reflection of the sun on to the water, just like a metaphor, I was drinking tea while the Engineer sailing the ship. I can see the Pirate boat are coming towards our ship, I fell frightening and terrible ,I feel my body was shaking like the Earthquake shaking on my body.

Then, the  pirate enter in our huge ship, First they attack the cook and taste some of the delicious dishes, Next the three Engineer are attacked by the evil pirate , and finally their leader was reached where I am and the Engineer, Then, he took my hat and shout to me , “Hey I’m the new Captain”, he said very evil, and he took the key of the Huge big ship, I’ll let him took the key because I know that the robot will save the day!.

His slave was also attacked ,the other people in the Big Ship, and they reach where the robot hiding, suddenly the other Robot came through to the pirate and attacked them, Bang!! Bang!!, the Big robot attacked the pirates. Then, the Big robot came to the room where the wicked pirate sailing the ship, Next the robot touch the arms of the pirate.

The Big Robot pointed his finger where the pirate and robot fighting, the wicked pirate was very shocked about what he saw. Finally, the Robot attacked the evil wicked Pirate leader and took the key back to me.

Yeahey!!!, shouted everyone, Robots save the day!!

So all the people in ship say thank you to the robots.

The End...            

Power Point

W.A.L.T. make a power point about New Zealand Music Month

Hi guys this Term 3, week 4, a couple of weeks we learned how to make a power point, and I have some Information about the NZ Artist that I choose, I was very challenging because it was very hard to find some Information about it, but really hope you enjoy it guys bye!!

Please come to our up Extravaganza!!!

Bye guys!!    

Danny's Travel to the Highest Mountain

W.A.L.T. write a descriptive piece of writing through the eyes of Danny

Hello guys! It's me again, This Term 3 ,week 3, my writing group wrote about Danny's Macaskill travelling to the highest mountain. I've learned this word: Metaphor. A Metaphor is a thing regarded as representative or symbolic of something else. 

I hope you guys enjoy my writing, have a good day.    

   

“The Ridge”

Written by: Elisha Mae

One day, a man named Danny was getting ready to travel to the highest top of the mountain. He put his helmet on, and rode in his own boat .

He start rowing the paddle of his boat and went through the lake.

He crossed the cold lake that was filled with seals swimming around the

lake. He also saw the gorgeous view of nature, the lake was so blue as the glass.

Then, he landed on white sand, he get’s off the boat, gets his bike off the boat and finally rides on it.

He past the rocky land up through the hill, suddenly he past on a big rock. Suddenly, he did a really cool trickson his bike, like a ball bouncing up and down to the ground.

Next, he went on a large wooded log he balanced his bike so he can cross it.

After he past it, he did a cool tricks to jump through the next rock.

          The tyres of his bike were strong as the wall, he can do any tricks on his bike. He finally reached the river, the river was very clear as the wobbly jelly.

He went up the rocky hill again and do tricks like ballet. It was impossible to climb up with his bike, so he carried his bike up to the mountain.

He was very confident to climb up the highest mountain, the rock was hard as the building. Until he’s on the top of the mountain, he looks to his side and saw the beautiful view.

The End

           

        

           

        

DLO fractions

We are learning to know about fractions

Hi people its me again! this week 3 Term 3 2017,  Me and my maths group learned how to add fractions and learned the three types of fractions, The three types of fraction are Proper fractions, Improper fractions and Mixed number.

Proper fractions - The numerator is less than the denominator

Improper fractions - The numerator is larger than or equal to denominator 

Mixed number -  A number written as a whole number with a proper fractions

1 - Numerator the top number, Numerator is the number of parts we have. 

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2 - Denominator, the bottom number Denominator is the total number of parts the whole divide into.

  I think my next step is to Improve my maths learning goals.

I hope guys you learned about my DLO, I will really appreciate if you learned fractions from my DLO.

Bye guys!   

Hornby Primary School Extravaganza

Hi guys this Term 3 week 2 to 3 we draw a poster about Extravaganza Production, I hope you come to our Extravaganza on Wednesday 3oth and Thursday 31st of August at 6:30 pm. Extravaganza is about New Zealand Music month culture, all the people living at the New Zealand celebrating NZ music month. 

Buster the Boxer story

W.A.L.T. Write a narrative through the eyes of Buster
Hi Everyone! Me and my groups learned a writing about Busted the Boxer.
First we watch the video about 

“Busted the Boxer”

Written by: Elisha Mae

It was night before Christmas. I was inside the house living with one small happy family. They had one daughter named Ashley, her father named Blake and her Mother named Marina.

“Up, down, up down”, I saw Ashley jumping up and down on her bed.

in a while, her Mum, Marina, went to her bedroom and kissed Ashley on the cheek and said, “Go to bed Ashley” . Ashley lay down in her bed and fell asleep.

I saw in the edge of the house her dad, Blake, was outside and building his trampoline Christmas gift for Ashley.

After he built it, he put a red fancy ribbon and tied it. He walked inside the house and watched a tv show with Marina at the living room. I was also at the living room.

While they were watching a tv show, I saw the two foxes named Mia and Ben were walking towards the trampoline and jumped in it.

Mia and Ben’s conversation.

Mia: Hey Ben! Look it’s a trampoline.

Ben: Oh yeah It’s very exciting.    

Mia Let’s jump in it!

Ben:Okay let’s go.

Ben and Mia climbed up and jumped up and down smoothly on the trampoline. Then, the badger, squirrel and hedgehog went to jump up and down on the trampoline too. They are having so much fun!!..      

“ I was so very envious that the animals were jumping up and down on the trampoline, because there were having so much fun and I was so bored inside of the house sitting in a fluffy coat, I wish I could Jump there”, I said to myself very sad.

The next morning, I saw the bright sunny sun rising up to the sky and it was cold snowy outside, everyone are awake. Ashley went outside to look for her Christmas gift that Blake prepare for her, and she saw a large trampoline gift sitting at their backyard, She was so very surprised,” Thanks mum and dad”, she said.

Next, She ran very fast as she can, towards the trampoline gift and I raced with her through the trampoline. I couldn't imagine what I’m doing  

Then suddenly she stopped. I came first to the trampoline and I climbed up to enter the trampoline, and jump gleefully.

They saw me jumping up and down. They are very shocked and confused after seeing me because I am a dog.

I was so very pretty jolly in this day, I was Jumping up and down very joyfully and pleasant, “This is the best day ever”, I shout happily.

(Best gift that everyone will love)

The End