Hi guys this Term 3 week 2 to 3 we draw a poster about Extravaganza Production, I hope you come to our Extravaganza on Wednesday 3oth and Thursday 31st of August at 6:30 pm. Extravaganza is about New Zealand Music month culture, all the people living at the New Zealand celebrating NZ music month.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Saturday, 5 August 2017
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Elisha maes it's Nevaeh i liked your post
ReplyDeleteHi it's Azire from Gilberthorpe school and this just needs a little bit more info like maybe you would like to go there next time you could post a Positive and a thoughtful and a Helpful one so next time you could go to my blog and look at the comments anyway bye
DeleteHi Nevaeh! Thanks for your comment, Next time you should put some more detail on your comment like Thoughtful and Helpful comment, before you post a comment on someone's blog you should double check it if you missed something, by the way thank you for your comment. Don't forget to double check it!
ReplyDeleteHello Elisha Mae!,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good blog post! You put heaps of detail in it. You also put the font and size colours so people can see easily! Your detail that you put in looks like were going to a fair! So when they see the poster they will see very good detail in it, and they will come to the Extravaganza! Nice going Elisha Mae! I'm looking forward to your next blog posts! Bye
Hi Brooke,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comment to my blog post, I really appreciate it, you can do it too,can I ask a question?, Did you like my post about Extravaganza.
thank you again for your comment Brooke,
Elisha Mae.
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ReplyDeleteHello Elisha my name is Tennessee and I think your post was the boom!
ReplyDeletelike how you told us the time that was a fantastic then to do but maybe next time a good thing to do is have different sentience starters and the it will be triple the boom bye
Hi Tennessee!,
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog, I really appreciate your comment and I will making sure next time that I have different sentence starters, Anyway thank you again for commenting on my blog.
Hello Elisha Mae I'm Jeraldine. You are good at writing and you have made 12 stories. I liked the way you put a fullstop in the right place and especially those 4 video thank you for sharing your blog.
ReplyDeleteHi Jeraldine!, thank you for commenting on my blog, I really appreciate your comments Jeraldine. It's good to see, that you are starting commenting on someone's blog.
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