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Wednesday, 23 June 2021

Social Studies: Over-fishing Paragraph

Today, we were tasked to write a Lawyer paragraph stating the two long term negative impacts of over-fishing. Here's the lawyer paragraph I've written:

Over-fishing is an ongoing issue for decades that has brought many negative impacts on the world. Firstly, it can cause the overpopulation of other species. Due to over-fishing, some species may erode and eventually lead to extinction. For example, in one of the South American inlets, sharks were over-fished. Because of this, the population of jellyfish increased, causing the water to become unsafe for both the other aquatic animals and humans. Another example of a negative impact of over-fishing is that it affects the ecosystem. Over-fishing can disrupt the order of the food chain. This is because taking too many fish from the water disrupts the food chain, other creatures that depend on seafood have to change a little and get better and change their surrounding conditions (features/ qualities/ traits).  Animals may be forced to travel to distant areas to survive. When that happens, they can be hunted down or forced out of the place for not being in their natural home/place. For these reasons, we need to urgently address this issue of over-fishing. 

1 comment:

  1. Kamusta Elisha Mae,
    This is a very detailed and informative paragraph that you have written about Overfishing. I like the variety of information and facts that you have included in there. You're writing is structured and very understandable to read. Everything is explained very well about what Overfishing is and how it is affecting our world. I also like that you have added a picture of what Overfishing might look like. Overall keep working hard and continue producing great work.

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