こんにちは！This week in English we've moved on to the next unit which is the 'Creative Writing: The Narrative'. One of the tasks required us to write a blogpost of the definition of the phrase 'show don't tell'. As well as having a go re-writing the sentences to 'show' and not 'tell'.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
This is a terrific post, Elisha. I really like how you extended your descriptions beyond just one sentence. I also like how you included images to make your work stand out. Ka rawe :)
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