Characters Collection "Holes" Great activity

Focus: Thinking Critically about what we have read and using our inferring skills.   

Hi guys this week, we have been doing our Last activity of our novel. 

We have 4 choices: Character collection, Text conversation, Going deeper and Create a game. Character collection, Character collection is to create a visual that shows items that would be important to one of the characters in your novel.  Text image, text image is about two image of the characters in your novel, having a text conversation. Next, Going deeper, Going deeper is about, a them, event or something else what you would like to Investigate further. And finally, Create a game, create a game is about using gamefroot to create a game that includes important parts of your novel.

 So I choose, character collection activity, because it more creative that you can do, like create your own characters collection of your novel, and also I challenge my self to be more creative and I also enjoy making a collection of my character because I loved making a model, because in my character collection we've make it out of modelling clay. 

Here's my worked/DLO looked like:

I've been working hard on it, so please can you give me some feedback?

So I hope you guys enjoy my blog post about Character collection on reading.

Bye guys have a good day!  

                            

     

Safety Netiquette rules for future

 We are focusing how to interact online in a kind, positive and helpful way.

Hi! This week 9, Term 3 2017, We've been learning about what is Netiquette are? and I want you to share some Netiquette rules of don'ts and dos online. I found at the first time, the Netiquette was an interesting word, but when I learned about it, it was really a good word. I was challenge about finding what do's and don'ts Netiquette rules. I hope you enjoy it!.      
What are Netiquette?
Netiquette are the rules of behaviour that apply when communicating online. The word Netiquette comes from the the words net and etiquette.
What is Etiquette?
 Etiquette are the rules of behaviour considered to be good manners.
What is Net?
Net is a shortcut of the word "Internet".
Why Netiquette is Important?
Netiquette is Important because, it is a rules for everyone, for how to behave online. Because some of the adults are not displaying the netiquette rules.

Here are Safety Netiquette rules for future 

Reflective comment: I think this is a good lesson for adult's, for how to behave online

  Next step: I will followed the rules, and showed the rules when I'm online 

Here's a link about Netiquette video

I hope you guys learned about my DLO...

Bye Guys have a good day, don't forget to followed the rules! and don't forget to give me a feedback!  

Great "Replay" Writing

W.A.L.T. I know I will be successful when I can…..

• Write a first person diary entry.

• Use a range of language features.
• Express ideas in correct paragraphs.
• Expand on ideas and use interesting sentence starters.

Hi guys!, this week 9, we have been doing a writing about "The little brother is eager to escape the confines of the bunker and when his sister brings home a tape recording of children playing he cannot resist anymore." I've been learning some interesting word like "Fragile", fragile means an object that easily broken or damage. Here's my writing down below and also there was link to the video.      

“Replay”

Warning!

You are gonna be reading my SAD STORY, you will gonna be need a tissue for your tears. Can I trust you?,Okay then, My name is Rony and this is my Diary, I’m also gonna tell what happened on 2076.

It was the 3rd of July, 2076, 2:00 of afternoon

Dear Diary,

Our town and our environment was already destroyed by the bad people, every house in our town are destroyed except, our house.  Our town was covered with sand and dirt

There is no trees and plants in our town and, even the animals are died by breathing the dirty air. Our town was so deadly BROKEN. We don’t have enough money to buy food, so my mum always go outside and collect some stuff that we could sell it. I was lonely in my bedroom, I have no friends, and I have no one could play with. I’m really bored.  A couple of minutes, my mum Niamey,  was already came back home. She got a lot of things in her bag, she brought me a flashlight. I hold the flashlight and turn on it, it was lightening like a bright  twinkling little star in the sky. She also brought a things from her bag, it’s interesting because it has two circle around it and It’s recording something like a children laughing and giggling.

I tried to get it but, my mum warned me that thing is dangerous and I need to sleep right now because it’s night time. I was really mad because my mum not allowed me to touch the fragile thing and she said, I’m not allowed to go outside with her because it’s dangerous. Now I’m in my bed and have to fall asleep. The Next Morning, I woke up so early, I check the clock it was 4:00 o'clock Am, and my mum is still sleeping. Ohh, I know, I will get the thing, I listen to the sound that was already record on the fragile thing. I can hear the Cheerful sound of the children playing, so I thought I can played outside by myself, without my Mum.

I wear the mask oxygen, so I can breath outside.

Later, Niamey, Rony’s mum is awake. “Get up lazy boy, time to wake up”, said Niamey, then, she put a water in the glass for Ronny to drink. But when Niamey check Rony in Rony’s bedroom, but Rony wasn’t there and the fragile thing that she found wasn’t there also,”Oh my god, it can’t be possible!”, Niamey said when she start panicking. She grabbed the extra oxygen container and rushed outside. I was outside, I can see the dirty air, and the house that ruined by the bad people and  the environment was also ruined. I stop, I can hear the soft tweeting bird from the sky, and I think I could record it in the the recorder fragile thing.

I can feel the dirty air through my skin, and I just continue walking until I can see, the river that doesn’t have any water. It filled with old fragile things, and the side of it there was a old dirty car, I walked through it, Suddenly, I can hear a bell noise coming from an old ruined school. Niamey was running with panic, in the middle of the dirty air, toward the city, to find Rony. I enter to the school gate, I can see a small playground in the front of the room’s, and in the edge of it, there was a run about rides.I come closer with it, I moved the hand of the ride, to check if it’s still working, “Yeah it is”, I said to myself joyfully, it was still working.

I sit to it, and put the old recorder on my side, and swing around the run about rides.I stop the ride “Huh?”, I was confuse, I could see a two children. without wearing an oxygen, I was shock…, I think they can breath in the air, I tried to take the mask off, but I remembered that, when I take off the oxygen mask I would be probably die. So I didn’t take it off.  

Next, Niamey was still finding Rony, her son until, she reached the city, she’s very worried about Rony. Rony stand up and come closer to the two ghost, he can see that the girl ghost has paper air plane to her hand, and she threw it away in the air.

It goes round and round, to the playground, it also past in Rony’s front, Rony trying to catch it, but it too higher to catch it, the paper airplane come and landed, in the front of the broken window. I turned around, and the two ghost was whispering to each other, and I think, they are talking on something, I really want to take off the protecting thing in my face, but I can’t.

Niamey have been running and finding Rony, in a couple of minutes, she stop, Niamey was very tired and felt like running out of breath.  

Rony was stubborn kid, so he ,first, take off the protecting thing in his eye, and drop it into the ground, the two ghost was looking to Rony.

Niamey past, the ruined river, where Rony has already past, Niamey was so nearly in the school, but it’s too late, Rony take off his mask oxygen and take a little breath.

His broken one foot has healed.

And, Suddenly a golden liquid magic power from Rony has also healed the environment, he looked in his around, the gold liquid magic power has turned the environment back into normal and also the whole town. It got turned back into a colourful place and pleasant place, the two ghost has also back into normal, it turned them into a human.

I was very shock after I take of my mask oxygen, it was just like a nightmare, and now it was so beautiful, “do you want to play with us?”, ask the two human, I smile and rush to get the paper air plane to the window, I realised it was just an imagine, everything did not back in normal. I was already die, I’m  lying in the ground.

As Niamey has arrived to the school, she enter the gate and she was very shock, she can see Rony was lying down in the ground, she can see I already take off my protecting thing to me like the oxygen mask, and the protect mask in my eye.

“Oh no Rony”, she cried, her tears sorrow in her face.

The only thing that Rony left is the recorder fragile thing…

                                                             The End…….

I hope you guys enjoy this writing!, Bye guys, have a good day!

making slime for our Marble day

W.A.L.T. (we are learning to) make a slime

Hello guys!, welcome back on my blog, This blog post is about making Slime for our Marble day, In our class we have a marble jar, inside of the marble jar, we have 100's marble, we have to earn that because if we earned all the marbles, we have a treat from our two amazing teacher.
After a couple of weeks we earned the 100 marbles, so we get the treat. we've vote some stuff,
but, the get most vote was ''making a slime'', so our two teachers decided to make a butter Slime for our Marble day! here's a picture of a butter slime

Butter Slime

        

Why we are making a butter slime?
Answer: We are making Slime because, we achieve our Marble day.

How we achieve our Marble day?
Answer: Before we achieve the Marble day, First, we have to earn the 100 marbles in the jar.

How to earned some Marbles?
Answer: To earned some Marbles we have to follow our rules/values and have a good manners and do the right thing.

What is our Values in class?
Answer:  Respect others, environment and selves, and do the right thing
Reflective comment: I'm very happy that we make a butter slime, because it was my first time to make a butter slime. It was very sticky but after a couple of minutes it's feel smooth and not sticky      

So, I really hope you guys enjoy this post about our Marble day.

Bye guys.... 

Piano writing

W.A.L.T.

I know I will be successful when... :

Re-call what is happening in the video.

Use adjectives and experiment with language features.

Use paragraphs correctly.

Begin sentence with different / Interesting sentence starters.

Hello guys! Welcome back on my blog, this time on week 7, Term 3 ,2017 we've been working a couple of weeks on a writing called "Piano", it's about a grandfather playing a grand piano and remembering his memories while his playing the piano. I was so carefully thinking what I'm gonna put on my writing, I was also challenging to find some interesting words to put on my writing, I really hope you enjoy this post.

Click a link down below in the underline word.

"Piano"

I can hear, a slow, sad, depressing music, as it floated in my head as my fingers danced on the piano keys. Suddenly, a memorable moment just popped out in my head, as I remember my pretty wife, named Lani, who was pretty as a princess. After an accident, my wife died in car crashed, I was still wearing my wedding ring, it was the sign of our unforgettable, endless love in sickness or in the trials, I will love my wife forever. But, a while ago, A ghost faded in and someone hold my hands and played piano together, It was the soul of my beautiful wife, it made me remembered all the times that we spent together. Then, She finally, kiss me on the cheek and faded away, I know I’m playing sad and depressing music because that is the only way to covered the pain that I felt.      

My fingers played the grand piano as fast as I can, Playing this tune was making me remembered my friend died in the war, Since, when I was a soldier. Way back, in 1997, It was the third of July, we are on the middle of the war, “ BANG BANG BANG”, a loud shoot from a gun my friend Dannie was hired by the bullet’s, My tears sorrow in my face, after my Friend died, I felt like I was alone in my life.

I was just keep playing my grand piano, and I remember something amazing when I was a kid. I remembered when it was my 4th birthday, I received a birthday gift from my parents, my birthday gift was a head of horse stick and I imagine my young self was duet playing my grand piano.

After I remembered all that memories my heartfelt that I was not alone after all.

The End  

Our Amazing School Production

"Our Amazing School Production"

This Term 3, 2017, week 6,On week 1 to week 6, we have been working really hard on our School Production of Extravaganza.

On the 30th and 31st of August 2017, Our Amazing School Production happened at the Hornby High School Auditorium, It was on 6:30pm started on boths nights,

      Our topic is about NZ Music Month, we have 10 New Zealand songs, we performed those 10 songs at both nights, The 10 songs are:

(Click the link on the words)

I see Red, Chains, 6 months on a leaky boat, Slice of heaven, Sway, How bizzare,

  we don't know how lucky we are, Outlook for Thursday, Gutter black and Why does love do this to me.

I choose 6 months on a leaky boat because it's sound really nice, Those 10  songs are New Zealand old songs, we choose those 10 songs because we want the people remember the awesome NZ Musics.

My group in "6 months on a the leaky boat song " are David, Lyan, Skyler, Bailey and Taneesha.

  We have been working very hard on the props that we need on our Music and also our two Amazing Teacher Mrs Millard and Mrs Machaclan are working very hard to organise our performance.

In my group (6 months in a leaky boat) our costume are Navy blue t shirt with white stripes, black pants and a Sailor hat, David was the captain and the others like me are members.

The "Why does love do this to me" song was the last music that we are going to perform ( All of us on Ako Ngatahi class).

Before the performance I was felt a little nervous because there was a lot of people in the front on the stage will watching us performed, I inhale and exhale myself to make me calm down and not feel nervous, Then, a couple of seconds I'm feeling come down and I felt now confident.

After our performance, we come to the stage and awarded the most have been working really hard on organising the Extravaganza event and say thank you to the Audience for coming on our Extravaganza.

What we have been learned: the steps dance, the music, where we are going to go (Back stage) and have confident.

Reflective comment: Our performance went really good, we smile at the audience ( having a confident) and we do our personal      

          Next Step: I think my next step is have more confident and tried my personal best

I hope you guys enjoy this blog post

See yah! have a great day.

And here's a slide show about what good things, bad things and Interesting that happened on the Extravaganza.